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[ Emily ]

Emily
Inquisitive, friendly, passionate, helpful
Kin to only the moon the stars and sun
Lover of beauty,
      of the passions unknown
                the exquisitness of humanity,
                      it's rise to fall.
Who feels the pain of the ones so close.
      grasps the debut of knowledge
                Feels the love of the Light of Life
                      in every fiber in my body.
Who fears the setting of the sun in the evening,
      when the colors retreat
                and black is left.   

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  • Eusebius
    February 13, 2008

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    bravo

    Very, very fine! the first 4 lines and the last 3 were most certainly, indeed, quite excellent! bravo... bravo... bravo...