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True(Haynaku)

True
Without you
Life is blue

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Option 2.Pickles knock my socks off.

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  • Virgoan
    September 27, 2007

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    This is very beautiful. The rhyme scheme in its brevity and the wisdom is powerful. My favorite by far.

    Thanks for sharing and keep on writing my friend.

    VIRGOAN


  • Onyx-Rose
    May 10, 2007

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    Short and sweet

    I liked it. You got your point across in three lines, telling a whole story and emotion. Very well done. Keep up the good work. I give you all my thanks for entering and wish you the very best of luck. God bless.
    Onyx