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November Rain

It's novenmber again
The skys are grey
As it starts to rain

We've walked the streets
But now everyone runs inside
It seems to get the better of them
This november rain

It's good to know that the streets are cold
We'll wrap up warm and walk them alone
The streets are full of cars
Everyones afraid of this november rain

It's november again
Everyone rushes as it feels like rain
Nobody stops to talk in the street
there all rushing home away from the november rain

It's november again
Everythings grey
As it starts to rain
This november rain

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  • Onyx-Rose
    May 10, 2007

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    Gloomy.

    Very gloomy, but still a good nature poem. Well written. Keep up the good work. Thanks for entering and good luck. God bless.
    Onyx