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Abuse

I think of all the pain
you've caused me as i sit here
and feel so ashamed for
letting myself be hit like that
over and over again but
i dont think that you understand
that your abusive twards me too...

I dont think that you relize
that im on the verge of
letting go... Im tired of all
the abuse. Im tired of all
the pain. My pain is almost
unberable but i just want you
to remember this i love you and
i will untill the end!!!

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  • Sle3p
    May 16, 2007

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    waaaa

    so very very very sad abuse is wrong but is wonderful in poetry wonderful great job


    -maddie


  • love my jose luis
    May 9, 2007

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    I think that you did a great job in showing how he treats you and how you feel about it. I think that this is one of your best poems yet. Keep up your great writing.
    ~Alix