Roaming down the meadow
Rustling leaves can be heard.
Rushing crystal water
Rousing a thirst for life!
Rainbow coloured image
Real delight to the eye,
Recognising our Lord!
A contest entry
- Pleiades Picture Competition V by ShelleyA.
525 points, ended May 19, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Nice title. Lovely imagery, flow and tone. Lovely depth of feeling. Good word choice. Nearly perfect form. Line 5 is 5 syllables, should be 6 syllables. Your faith shines through in this piece. Your poem fits the picture for which it was written. Thank you for your entry. Shelley
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Thank you very much for the comment. Thouroughly enjoyed the competition it was very challenging. God Bless.
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