Excitement always enlightens me with a hope
I am determined physically and psychologically.
All my stars too favour me without a dissent
It gives me a ray of hope that i succeed surely in my attempts
When I am gaining weight my eyes fall dim
and my soul perfectly advises me the need to go thin
All the muscles that makes fatty rounds on me unitedly
suggest always a way out to make me win the race
Heviness in body makes my mind terribly weak at times
and the heart rate goes blasting with ups and downs on E C G.
So i changed My life style and moved fast my eating habits to hug new ones
In the early hours my first drink is fresh lemon water with aslightly warm water with honey ,if permitted
My break fast is only fruit salad and no oily item on plate
Lunch and dinner go with almost half the quantity what i 've taken earlier
Evening drink is only green tea that keeps the health cordially
more intake of water at least 3 to 5 litres aday makes me feel light
ALL THESE HEALTH TIPS ALONG WITH MEDICAL ADVICES FROM RELIABLE SITES
MAKE ME GO STRONG IN WILL AND PLEASURE
Author notes
obesity is not a worrying disease now
A contest entry
- 0 by Lauren Noir.
850 points, ended June 2, 2007, 27 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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This is brilliant
It is in touch with the real world and real things
You got beauty and a reliable plan for everything
There was poetry and fact
Really cleverly done
I liked the line at the end in the author's notes
"obesity is not a worrying disease now"
It's true
Thnak you so much for this entry, it means so much




