Yet another step yet another mile
Some tears dried, lost some smile
Forgone but friends,missed as foes
Praised on wins, lost many woes
Death not my destiny, Life's so my reason
As slack did I leave try me for treason...
A contest entry
- Make Me Smile. by I will stand by you.
300 points, ended May 9, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very interesting thoughts. Does make one think.
Thanks for sharing.
Jeannie
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Nice, not too bad. It's a little difficult to fully comprehend come certain parts, but in it's entirety it's a pretty decently written poem, displaying a few intriguing ideas. Well done!
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so short but still it gives us an impactable impression... well done and i wish you luck in the contest
cheers
jen -
I really enjoyed reading this on this beautiful morning, thank you for sharing you us and best of luck in the contest... you did a fantastic job penning this one..keep up the great writing
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there is a carenot attuide in this poem, something to inspire to really. as i read it, i knew i smiled, keep it flowing my friend and good luck in the contest.
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