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Buttered Biscuits

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It took me awhile

to get over the shock

of losing myself so completely

to that screaming banshee need

that sucked all the sleep from the night


Too tired to fight

for the pieces left intact

and glued back

in strange odd-fashioned

configurations

of invisible


So I let myself go

to the heart of the matter

suckling in the crook of my arm

with his sweet baby needs

so destructive and raw ...

biting the nipple of tomorrow

with the urgency of a primal hunger

too deep to feed on the shadows

of yesterday’s sorrows

clogging the duc work with its sour curdle

 

So I rocked against the churn of the storm

until I made sweet butter out the cowardly lion

and spread him on biscuits with soft warm kisses

 

feeding my munchkin with his first taste of courage


 

 

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Author notes

Good luck and lots of love Shawn ... and spawn of Shawn too (giggle)

Just remember ... it may take a little while, and a lot of courage, to adjust and bond to your new life as a mother, but just the smell of that sweet little head will make you feel like Aretha Franklin ... like a natural woman

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  • barefoot contessa silver member
    July 19, 2007
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    The reliving and reliving of those moments last a lifetime. Well, that is what my mothers said about me. This piece makes me want to go out and have a baby. Do you know of any good sperm banks? I heard their are a couple of drive-thru but just not where.

    (Probably went to far in the last two sentences. Oh well that's so me.) lol


  • spamwitch
    May 12, 2007
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    Powerful

    Wonderful way to put it. I can identify with this already. The threat of pre-term labor looming, yet, I worry that I'm not worried enough. I've spent a lifetime with just me, it's hard to imagine giving that much of myself to another. Yet I know I cannot wait for that smell!!

    Thank You


    • transcendental baby gold member
      May 12, 2007
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      That is a perfectly natural way to feel ... your life changes completely ... but you will never love anyone as much as you will your babies


  • Taranand
    May 9, 2007

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    Wonderful

    Ooo..I loved this poem. So deeply feminine; that primal urge to mother. You've captured it so well.
    The moon will be smiling tonight.
    Love Tara

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