Pallid, pretty pastel
pictures of paradise
painted to perfection
peacefully portray a
pompous presentation
pretending providence,
pontificating praise.
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Pleiades
A contest entry
- Pleiades Picture Competition V by ShelleyA.
525 points, ended May 19, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Nice title. Perfect form. Very good flow and tone. Good depth of feeling. Good word choice. Strong alliteration. Nice assonance. Thank you for your entry. Shelley
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Pignant---Provacative----Pleasing----Praised!
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Great Alliteration employed in this Pleiades poem. This poem has a subtle twist and needs to be read and reread to get a fuller sense of the contrast woven into it. Well Done.
Dennis
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Thanks Dennis.
I respect how you always understand...
Peace, Brother!
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Pleiades perfection profoundly provided..
This is every well done..
Amazing!
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This is fabulous! Excellent pleiades with such a striking and sincere emotional quality. Perfect!
~Lori
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Oh! This is awesome! Great job!! =)
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Speechless
This is a pleiades and a half, I think the word I'm looking for is perfection.
Good luck in the contest...Sue
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