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Gonfler

Bright yellow-- the deep!
"A fear of rasp-berry." Brick.
(tick-tick,) Shoo pea pod.

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I hope this is obscure enough.

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  • risewiththesmoke
    May 20, 2007
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    hmmm... i like it


  • sock monkey
    May 9, 2007

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    This is wistfully poignant. No, it's just strange, with an urgency about it that defies meaning. A grand haiku. Great job.