the unsewn part
of life
is sometimes
the best -
i have developed
a phobia to
certain sounds of
needle painting
my skin
In a list
A contest entry
- You know who you are... by Nicole Hanna.
11000 points, ended June 8, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Like Ana said, this is an excellent example of short and sweet, yet has punch and pazzazz...lol. Fabulous ending...I can still the painting.
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I think you are very quickly becoming my favorite "short poem" poet. lol. You always seem to have the perfect handle on capturing a mood or moment without wasting a single word or beat. This is a good example of that. Loved this
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That last sentence is a killer..I just love this one.
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Thank you very much.
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this is very nice. it's short and vast. just how i like it
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Thanks for the comment.
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i like this poem i mean it, you did a great job on this, it was good, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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