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*~*~Skies Of Bliss~*~*

My soul only aspires
To soar upon the skies of bliss
And be free of desires.

I only need to strengthen
The wings of my faith,
To be transported to my dreamland.

I pray to the light of wisdom
To shine upon my pathways
And be my guide star.

As the light of wisdom falls
Upon my wings,
I understand
How magically, mysteriously
Faith attracts wisdom.

As I bask in the glory of this light,
I feel empowered beyond measure.
And power brings true vision
Of beauty to my senses, as I
Begin to discover
Radiance
In everything I look at.

As my soul inhales the fragrance
Of this radiance serene, it is burnt down
With incapability of
Exhaling anything
Other than bliss!

Now, as I breathe, I create
My own skies of bliss,
No matter where I am.

As I enter my dreamland, I turn back
Once, with a sense of achievement
To look at the trail
Of fine footprints I leave behind.

~Faith; Wisdom; Power; Beauty; Bliss~

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  • Luciferschild
    May 9, 2007

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    most of the time i cannot stand free form poetry but this was written very creatively, i could feel myself breathing out bliss!!!


  • Aun Ali
    May 9, 2007

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    Well Versed & Very True

    A beautiful thought this time again. Actually you said it right Faith is the actual factor that influences the Wisdom, the Power, the Beauty and Bliss.

    Faith is the channel of communication between Human Being and God.
    Faith gives the real strength and power Spiritually and Psychologically.
    Faith is the reflection of Wisdom and Wisdom is the Secret of Beauty.
    The Combination Of Power, Wisdom and Beauty is the Bliss caused by Faith again.

    A beautiful creation of yours is this poem and its your pride that you created the thought. Congrats!!!

    Yours Truely
    Aun Ali


  • Sidra Sabella
    May 9, 2007

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    this is stunning, you have captured the imaculate mental image of a revelation. its vibrant and specific but it flows so beautifully. i think it will probably mean different things to everyone but it will also touch each reader deeply.

  • Seeking Peace silver member
    May 9, 2007

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    This is beautiful, uplifting and so powerful, that you are able to pull all this together, to light your own way and create the life you want is inspiring, brilliantly penned, I strive to reach a place like this myself and you have given me a glimpse into how it can be achieved... awesome

    Karen


    • SabaSophiya
      May 9, 2007
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      Thanx, Karen, for your beautiful comment on my work. I am glad u enjoyed the SKIES OF BLISS.

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