we shake all our cows.
smoothness whipped in the udder.
makes better butter.
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- Dust Off Those Old Haiku (Traditional 5-7-5) by Pollycheck.
425 points, ended December 15, 2007, 57 entries
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we shake our cows.
smoothness whipped in the udder.
makes better butter.
Thank you for entering my ku contest. This is a very well written haiku, but it does not meet the requirements for a traditional 5-7-5 haiku. I only count 4 syllables in the first line. -
Interestingly Funny!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You know you are giving West Virginians a bad name don't you????lol....just joking. This is certainly full of vivid imagery to say the least. Let me know how that butter turns out!!!!Nice job!!!!~~Toni~~
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Holy cow... this is surely one interesting way to get better butter.... made me laugh, needed that... thanks
Karen
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am with sis on this but i wanna see you shake the cow guess you do things differently in WV...
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lol well it would create an interesting way to spread it on your toast!
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