Rainbow, rainbow, in the sky
Standing tall after a brisk rain
Never ending, a prism of color,
As you look for the pot of gold at the end
When the true prize is right in front of your eyes
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I know... weird... but my friend donna had to do a rainbow poem, so i posted MY OWN INDIVIDUAL VERSION of it.
Please tell me what you think
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Neato
This is a rockin kick butt cool poem and I really like how the poem flowed so beautifully and the ranbows of all subjects is quite brilliant. any ways very nice job with this poem and just liked the visualization through out. keep up the good work -
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Dang
Dang, you seem to really like it! I didn't really spend that much time on it, but thank you anyway! I was going to try to make a haiku out of it instead, but I'm just like, I can't put a rainbow's fantastical feature in just 17 syllables! Thank you for reading and commenting!
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Nice
Liked it. Pretty good. Imaginary. love your imagination.
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you so thoughtful!!!
You are always there for me you're awesome! thank you I'm glad you like it!!!!!
Love ya!
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GOODNESS I LOVEE IT
gosh daughter??
why are you more talented than me
i love rainbows.
yesss i do XD
love youuu!
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Ooooo Thankies!!!!
lol nooooo i'm not! u r an awesome poet!!!! yeah i like rainbows after a huge rainstorm the rainbow kind of tells us, 'the worst is over'.
i lubbie u momma!!!
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I love it
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You're so sweet!
Thank you verrrry much!!
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Well Penned
Very well said. The rainbow itself is the prize. We tend to get caught up in work, school or whatever. A means to an end, sure, but we need to remember our true goal.
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Thank you so much!!!
ooooooo i'm glad you got the gist of it! I'm glad u like it too! And it's true we are so caught up in the crap life throws at us we don't pay attention to the simple, heavenly gifts that are given to us!
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