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Mistakes... (Advice!!)

People make mistakes
but just forget about them and move on
if you have a bad habit of making mistakes
try to change your bad actions for the next time something like it occurs
Everyone makes mistakes
and no one is perfect
even i make mistakes
and i'm sure you do too
There are several ways of making mistakes
There are making bad choices
and making more problems
it is pretty easy to make mistakes
I make bad choices pretty often
whether it is where i want to go for the weekend
or for like school things
i could go on and on but this paragraph has to end
Also making more problems
You could be very headstrong and help break a fight
once again, bad choice!
It'll just be a mistake to make the problem worse
You see a lot of things occur when it comes to making mistakes
Sometimes you just have to avoid them and move on
Well talk to you later!
Dont forget! Think your choices over maybe next time you'll make a better choice!

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  • nichtmich silver member
    May 9, 2007

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    Well Said

    This is more of a story than a poem, but I agree with your advice. I think we need to learn from our mistakes and quit making them over and over.

  • FilthBreedEngage
    May 8, 2007
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    it sucks

    Even for a 10 year old, its just like your telling a story, not a poem. Sorry