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Home Alone 3

To the bathroom, to the tub
Let the shower, rain from above

Bodies glisten, hot and wet
You pull me close, caress my chest

As the steam, intensifies
Our intamacy, intensifies

Once inside, my dick reside
I fill you up, you're satisfied

I pound you hard, I grab your hips
You wrap your legs, and kiss my lips

So full of passion, so full of pleasure
nothing better, nothing wetter

I bend you over, and slide in fast
You back it up, I slap your ass

I make you scream, till you cant talk
I beat it up, till you cant walk

Seven and a half, it makes you hot
I plunge in deep, and hit your spot

Keep the pace, for endless hours
Till the rain's, not from the shower

But from your love box, as you peek
You cum real hard, and clench your teeth

Though we're exhausted, we both want more
So this bliss continues untill round four


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  • HRHkaytee
    March 21, 2008
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    best poem ive read in a loong time
    got me and my man going
    keep it up

  • Blackraign
    November 24, 2007
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    frak u and her r some serious freaks but still I'll admit your potry is some of the best


  • ExpectingMommy18
    November 12, 2007

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    wow this is the third part?
    i would love to read the first two als
    this was real hot and you did a great job with this peice,thanks for the entry and good luck in the contest


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    October 24, 2007
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    i would like to thank you so very much for this fine entry into my contest for david. it is truly appreciated more than you can possibly know. am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future and i wish you the best of luck in this contest. viyanna rosemarie

  • Angel Eyed Baby
    October 8, 2007
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    Oh damn....
    lol


  • Expression
    October 5, 2007
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    FREAKY SELF LOL


  • Atrophya
    May 8, 2007
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    Okay.... I CAN'T talk anymore. lol. =] sexy ass poem!!

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