Something tells me your not being true
To yourself you should give all you have
Become the person your heart wants to be
And get rid of those feelings so sad
Feeling the pain you so clearly display
Is a crime in itself I declare
As we suffer in silence together this day
Remember my friend I'll be here
So relax those frowned muscles
And smile once again
Lets dance to the music they play
And together we’ll sail on an ocean of peace
As this night turns over to day.
Author notes
'pickles rock my sox off'
option two - song title - '' I'll be ''
In a list
A contest entry
- Options! Pick and Go! by Onyx-Rose.
400 points, ended May 24, 2007, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Such a beautiful set of words to enrich the picture. Remember a smile is contagious. Best of luck to you my friend
Becky
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BRAVO!!!
For a very creative and uplifting piece, you deserve the GOLD trophy for this one!!!
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i like this. it carries a very deep message in it's simplicity. love these lines:
So relax those frowned muscles
And smile once again
reminds me of a song i learned as a child. thank you for sharing this. keep writing! God bless you always
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Beautiful.
Very unique. I liked it. It's just that simple, I liked it, very much so. Keep up the good work. Thank you for entering and I wish you the best of luck. God bless.
Onyx
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Always let your heart be free, no negativity needed just a smile and all is well. That is a feeling I cherish and hope to be a part of forever. Love, C
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This is so beautiful....finding solace in your wonderful poetry and feeling rejuvenated by your words anyone would smile...smiles, Terry
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WONDERFUL
This is a wonderful poem my friend~feeled with soothing comfort and a sweet need:together we'll sail on an ocean of peace As this night turns over too day...sweet secerts to be shared
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