when i was strolling on the walk ways of green meadows
astonishingly I came across you and found you in the rose garden
Unable to pluck a white rose flower from its plant
you cried aloud with afear of being stung By a thorn
In the first glance itself I am very much impressed by your innocence
iam not intelligent enough then to meet you and to greet you
I missed to have a chance of projecting my profile before you
first impression yoy are beautiful in smiles and it lasts long in me
Author notes
FIRST IMPRESSION BEST IMPRESSION
A contest entry
- I wan't to get lost in your eyes by shattered logic.
440 points, ended May 13, 2007, 19 entries
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well done, i think it was a little wordy, but still a very good write. This was full of smart vocabulary if that makes sense lol, the flow is nice.
It's short and sweet and ohhhhhh sooo true well done and good luck!!!!
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