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Iris

Somber blue meets with sunlight.
Illuminating the world and leaving
A sense of serenity, tranquility and hope.

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Poem inspired by: http://www.exterpassive.com/naturewallpaper/images/iris1280x1024.jpg
Option 2 - Iris

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  • Onyx-Rose
    May 8, 2007

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    Well Written.

    This is the shortest poem I've read so far, and yet, I think it's one of the best. You made your point in three short lines. Very good, I commend you. Keep up the good work. Good luck and thanks for entering. God bless.
    Onyx


  • Layla Thomas
    May 8, 2007
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    mmmm this was definately a peaceful write..

    lovely indeed!


    • li li
      May 8, 2007
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      Pleased that you enjoyed it. Thanks for the applauses.