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untittled..........

she takes the razor in her hand,
presses it against her wrist,
her one and only goal,
this time she won't miss.
the vain is sliced open,
she bleeds till she dies,
all of this she does,
without even one tear to cry.
her life ment nothing,
it never did,
she was just in the way,
a annoying braty kid.

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sick of it....this poem sucks but i dont care....came up with it in under a min...just neeeeed to cut...just want to. just want to die.

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  • GettingPlayed09
    February 27, 2008

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    it doesnt suck and my mom tells me that when your at your lowest point life can only get better so think about that


    • nobodys-girl
      February 27, 2008
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      aww thanks. im actually much better now, finally coming out of my depression and just happy! thank so much for commenting on this and my other poem!


  • SlowlyxDying
    May 12, 2007

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    sad

    It's a great poem, but it's sad. Just remember, that you're not going to be in that school with those assholes forever. <3333

    • nobodys-girl
      May 13, 2007
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      thankyou! ya i know i won't be stuck with them forever...sometimes it's hard to remember...thankyou for commenting!


  • MetalHouse III
    May 9, 2007
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    oh baby....whats wrong?...please dont...you got to stay strong...


  • lost-in-yesterday
    May 8, 2007
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    what have i told you? dont give up and dont give in im here if ya need me.
    luv ya jess

    • lost-in-yesterday
      May 8, 2007
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      like i said never give up and never give in. there is so much more out there. maybe a good thing to do would be to move schools after this year an dgo some where new. or maybe u need to let some one know there harasment you going thro. jess

      • nobodys-girl
        May 8, 2007
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        theres not harrament going on at my school...not really...thats more otta school...

        i dont know. everything hurts. all i want to do is cut and i can't.
        i have no one here. no one at all...

        it just hurts

        • lost-in-yesterday
          May 9, 2007
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          i know what thats like. and its hard trust me i know haw hard that is. but all you can do is fight it. trust me quitings not easy it took me a few times to be able to comepleatly stop. iv only been cleen from cutting for about 6 months. its a fight but you gotta do. dont so it for anyone but you. your the only person you can do it for. i made the mistake of doing it for someone else and it back fired and ended up being the reason for a relapse. just plz be careful.
          jess


          • nobodys-girl
            May 9, 2007
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            ya deffinitly ended up cutting last night....god i hate myself. i wsih i was stronger....
            talk to you later

            • lost-in-yesterday
              May 9, 2007
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              hey dont hate your self. it happens. trust me all you can do is keep on going an dnot give up every one has to fall. thats the only way we get up and get stronger. i hope this helps.
              jess

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