I was about to give up on love,
I was tired of getting hurt,
But I was tired of being alone,
It always ended the same way,
Me with a broken heart,
Him saying he was sorry,
And telling me some lame excuse.
But then there was you,
I wanted to just be friends,
So I wouldn't get hurt,
But that didn't work out,
Because I was drawn to you,
You were different from the rest,
You were better then the rest.
After we were dating awhile,
You wrote me note one night,
You told me how you felt,
That you felt the same as me,
That you were tired of getting hurt,
You left the love thing up to me,
And I realized that's why your different.
So when the time was right,
I told you I loved you,
And you said it right back,
I knew it was geniune,
And you really meant it,
And you still do every time,
You're everything to me,
And I love you more then you'll ever know.
Author notes
"Pickles rock my sox off" option #4
So this about my boyfriend, my exboyfriend cheated on me after almost eight months together and broke my heart. About a month later I met my new boyfriend who is brothers with my best friends boyfriend. So we hang out all the time. And I really do love him so much, and he is everything to me.
A contest entry
- Options! Pick and Go! by Onyx-Rose.
400 points, ended May 24, 2007, 33 entries
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Comments
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truely envyous lol
wow that is so amzing but iam jelous good girl are hard to come by i have one but iam afade shell live me like all the rest but ur amzing -
Good.
I can't say that I was amazed, but I didn't have to force myself to read it. I know how this feels and I'm glad it all worked out for you, even better that it can become a work of art. Good luck in my contest, thanks for entering. God bless and keep up the good work.
Onyx
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