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Confusion, lies, and yet another one of your lines
you told me you cared, when i needed you, you weren't there.
Curled on the floor, tears running down my face
I look in the mirror, I'm a disgrace.
you can't have us both
you need to choose who you care for the most
you can't have her with me on the side
choose who you want, don't bother with your lies.
If you want your precious angel so much, go to her
don't worry about me I'm used to my heart getting torn.
Go to her, your brown eyed girl
but remember I'm the one who gave it all........

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  • Kristin Melissa
    May 9, 2007

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    Remember hun you took something that she will never be able too, so don't worry... yeah she may have him, but she'll always have to remember you had him first.
    ~*~ Mystic

  • I feel your poem

    It seems that the guy always seems to have to choose which is the best because he is greedy in the begining. That happened to me a little while ago. I wish both of us chicks that he likes dumped his ass then what ya know? But that didnt happen. She didnt dump him and he dumped me. Raise above it. Sometimes you have to meet Mr. wrong before you meet Mr. right. Remember that.