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Stupid poem, and rhyming schemes
only to let out alittle emotion
maybe someday my poetry will be famous
even better someone would just notice
one time, would someone care
not to walk right past me
every little stare hurts.

heold onto your dreams they will slip away
everynight I ppray they will stay
lookign through the window
people are just laughing and having fun

might I get the chance to do that
even if only for a day

Please tell me what you think

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  • Kristin Melissa
    May 9, 2007

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    Mandie... This is really good hun as you said you spelled words wrong, owell... It's still good...
    ~*~ Mystic