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Grown acustom to your lies

I loved him to death
He was mine to hold
To love and to kiss
It always was a very Mad World
But I never saw this coming
He tells me he loves me
And 3 hours later
Here I am
Curled up in a ball in the bottom of the shower
With the blood dripping down my arm
Crying
Dying
Well he is goodbying
Telling me he doesn't love me anymore
Our song heard softly over the pattering of the icy shower water
'It's a very very... Mad World"
He says goodnight and goodbye
And I am left to cry
I can't open my eyes
And I cover my ears
As I sob
And I cry away the pain
That just keeps coming back
"Are you okay"
No I am not okay
"What's wrong?"
Everything. I am broken. I am crying, dying, my world is falling apart.
The unkept promises burn in my heart
'Please Andrew never leave me. Just don't'
'Don't worry my love, I will never leave you'
Although I hope you choke on your 'i love you's' and your promises
Although I want to hate you
I can't
Because I have grown accustom to your lips
Because I have grown accustom to being in your arms
Because I have grown accustom to your lies

I have grown accustom to your love

Author notes

Yes he did leave me emili.. he did...

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  • WhenWillsCollide
    May 10, 2007
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    ok. I will pretend like I dnt know you to makes this a fair contest for all of you ppl.

    firstly, I very much enjoyed the set up of htis poem. it was very affective in catching my attention b/c normally I dnt like free verse. the emotion in this was very strong... I very much enjoyed reading this and thank you so much for entering!

    ((lol)) that was hard.

  • Headstrong2TakeUOn
    May 10, 2007
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    u should've known D:


  • WhenWillsCollide
    May 9, 2007
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    do u think it wuz a set up? like, a "pay b ack?"
    man... that sux....
    i feel so bad for you....


  • Wolven Roses
    May 8, 2007
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    ??? What is up with ur authors notes?
    Anyway, sad poem, and it confuzles me...