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Melvin



He'd told the fortune teller
he was on the road to nowhere
She then looked at him;
mysteriously said,
"They're building an Arby's up ahead"


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  • CookieZeal Greeters member
    May 21, 2007
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    Loved it~ Obscure, but profound as the monkey requires..LOL.
    Thank you...!


  • Whoochi gold member
    May 9, 2007
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    LOL...too funny...where do ya come up with this stuff...i wanna live a day in the head of you!


  • HaleyMary
    May 9, 2007
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    lol. Is that supposed to be a prediction or something?
    There probably would be an Arby's on a road to nowhere and probably a Macdonald's and a Burger King. I think the part of it the fortune teller saying it mysteriously makes the poem most confusing of all. Anyway, great write, Good luck in the contest.


  • Blueskywonder
    May 9, 2007

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    Hmm sometimes you boggle my senses,lol
    well this is one of those times,lol

    This is as obscure as a comet in the sky in daylight,lol
    Excellent!


  • Lost in nature
    May 8, 2007
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    lol, thats great^^ i love it!


  • sock monkey
    May 8, 2007
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    That one is a puzzler. Very funny. Definitely in the right spirit.

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