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peeling through thick layers of skin unknown to me,
dismantling my protective cage of bones,
untangling messy lengths of veins and arteries,
tracing them to their original start,


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I am searching for my heart

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The first thing I've written as a 15-year-old.

I'm heartless. Eh?


~Broken Floorboards

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  • Fallen Under Light
    April 27, 2008

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    Interesting.
    I would've loved this to be a little longer, but nevertheless, wonderful write. XD