I know what you're about to say.
I know, I know. You don't need to keep going.
You don't want me anymore. That simple.
You know it's true and I know it's true.
You say you don't want me anymore.
That's quite okay. I don't need you anyway.
I found someone else, and it's not you.
If you regret this, then you regret it. Nothing I can do.
You know what you did is wrong, but you just can't admit it.
That's why we're not back together. JUST ADMIT IT!
A contest entry
- Inspiration needed by Floorboards.
525 points, ended May 9, 2007, 14 entries
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Please tell me what you think. I feel like a beginning writer in this one, and I don't know why.....Please tell me your HONEST opinions. Thanks.
Comments
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i can feel all your emotion running threw every word i think she will regret it but she probley will never admit to it sence you have moved on great write!
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emotional
this is a very emotionally charged poem, well written, thank you very much for entering my contest and good luck to you,
floorboards.
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