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87-Rose Bud

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You called me Rose Bud when we met

It made me feel secure

My body lie dainty in your arms

But I would soon mature

 

At first you treated me good

Enjoyed the fragrance of my soul

You treasured me with fondness

As I bloomed to nature's mold

 

As you tried to peel the petals

You tore my heart into

You tired of a simple rosebud

And wanted someone new

 

Leaving me alone with petals torn

To wither up and cry

While you search for another rose

I will slowly die

Author notes

Black Rose = Death, Farewell, Morbid, Dark

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  • Candy6
    July 3, 2007

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    wow

    This poem is very and very beautiful well written. You are so talented. I bet you get a lots of comments on this poem.


  • Never Fall in Love
    May 8, 2007

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    Wow .. this is beautiful
    Put in some capitalization
    and you're good to go
    other than that
    this is great