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Never

Never knowing where life
might lead. Never knowing
where the streets may take
me. Never caring if I lived
or died. Never knowing real
pain, or for that matter
real love. Never getting
enough sleep. Never ceasing
the crying. Never letting go
led to... never waking up.

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  • poet43
    July 12, 2007
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    But, now you are ...

    Iq, your poems will translate your mind's eye into the messages for your readers. Take the sweetness that is in your being (you know it's there) and display it for all who know it's there.

    There is in each of us a glow
    There, just behind that wall
    Change your view to let it flow
    Then those you love, you will enthrall

    poet43

  • OurxBeginning
    May 8, 2007

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    Interesting. Think everyone has felt this way before. It's deep and holds a lot of emotion. Nice work on this.