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Pilled Up

Pilled out your head
Can’t go to bed
Face contorted gurning
A conversation yearning
Staring at the sky
And wondering why?
Wondering about what?
Oops I’ve forgot
Smoking my last fag
Savouring every drag
Any negative thoughts
Are long gone
Me and the world
Have become one

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  • jamiedoring
    November 5, 2007

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    Another awesome poem. Love the title and the words captued me....so true.....
    Wondering about what?
    Oops Ive forgot.

    Loved it!

  • LaurenLightning--x
    May 8, 2007

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    Brilliant ^.^

    I love this!
    The rhyming is consistant the whole way through.
    And you describe life on pills perfectly.

    Thank you for entering and Good Luck!!! =]