Sweet coverlet of perfumed petals
caresses our skin
I reach for your luscious lips to devour
as a dance of twilight fills the air
Fantasies peak in soft whispers
Enticing our spirits
Your hands glide gently across my curves
pulling in, closer, to embrace
Your sighs mesmerizes me, your name on tip of tongue
twisted together in delicious taste buds of seduction
Leaving imprints of succulent sweet nibbles in raspberry lip gloss traces,
upon your neck, I embrace you, once more, in harmony
A tingling pleasure surges through our souls
as your strong arms tense, then release
Playfully rolling over the velvety coverlet, golden tresses dangle
upon your shoulder, I brush my cheek upon your chest
Sliding down, prowling forward in cat like movements,
as your smoldering coal eyes are still aflame with dreams of more
Our spirits now floating, we slowly indulge our every desire
Provoking all senses to rise
Intensity comes
Be still, my love~
as we gaze into each others hearts
We lay our heads upon the pillows, flying in a cloud of simple pleasures
You lean over me, sprinkling perfumed petals of love upon my body
Sporting a grin, then a soft, delicate kiss, our eyes now meet in contentment,
as we linger in this sensual moment of tender delight
Author notes
Hope this is what you both desire
Anonymous contest
A contest entry
- Subtle erotica tastefully written by Naridill.
650 points, ended May 17, 2007, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Not only was this a subtle eerotic poem but you also brought sensual and loving as well as a bit of spirituality into it. Thanks for sharing a bit of heaven with us!
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Congratulations on the gold. This was truly a winner..
Very well done with a tasteful expression of sensuality.
Great job
Soulful Woman
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Oh I do like this. I agree with DwellingInDarkness on the flow.
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Hello Markgrif,
Thank you ever so much for the kind review and for awarding me such a beautiful trophy
Tickle me pick with petals as I am so thrilled that my poem was so graciously awarded! Thank you!
Des
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This is certainly tasteful! So much more than that - it is just so intensely serene, if there is such a feeling... You have a wonderful way with words, expressing the depth of love and lust with intricate waves of beauty and sophistication. What poignant thoughts of love and romance to be found. This is surely a new favorite of mine from you Destiny!!!!
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Definately a beauty!!! I liked the imagery. I found it easy to read with a beautiful flow.
Somewhat I think Mark will definately be alot more impressed, as I feel it was written for a man (hmm, slap me if I'm wrong
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Thanks for entry!!
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Dearest DwellngInDarkness, thank you for you gracious review and for the award! I really enjoyed writing this one* maybe a little too much
and I do say, You are correct in saying that it was probably written with a man in mind but, we can always pretend we are the ones in the receiving end lol
Oh to dream!
I so appreciate you hosting a fine contest such as this and look forward to your next!
Many thanks to you both
Des
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what a lovely piece of peotry...you ahve certainly captured some amazing imagery with this..very well done you have crafted something very beautiful xxx
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