Phyciatric wards
full of p.r.e.t.t.y[fuckedup] girls
and (miss)understood boys
Living candy.land. fantasies
tripping over black (rain)bows
&&
plastic mannequins dancing;;
posing under technicolor skies
moving about [but never really alive]
Glitter tradegies for the stars;;
------>shooting up on [bro/ken] boulevards
snorting cocaine;;
to have a little bit of glitter running through their veins
Needles of wordship;;
[ripping like razorblades]
through bro/ken hearts;;
{glitter}tradgedy fantasies
--soon--
become twisted (fucked up) realities
for all the hollywood boys && girls
illuminating*darkness on their
f.a.k.e. mccoys
&& leaving them to shoot
razors && glitter
(into) their heads
to have d.a.r.k.n.e.s.s. fall on
their
rehersed acts
.once again.
Please tell me what you think
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I like this a lot!
I was wondering if I could use some of your poems for a project Im doing at school. Ill give you credit and everything, Im just showing them what DP is. -
Wow. That's a LOT of punctuation...
I like the part about the psychiatric ward...
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'[Phy]ciatric wards
full of p.r.e.t.t.y[fuckedup] girls
and (miss)understood boys'
great poem, but coul;d you please re-read the rules as you have missed a phrase from your authors notes, thanks =] ♥
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