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My Family, My Life

Saturday morning bright and early
To a slight tug of bed sheets I wake
Deep brown eyes staring back at me
Small boy, five years old full of ambition
I hear "Daddy, Daddy, get up its Saturday"

I get out of bed gently as to not wake my wife
Quick Shave, Shower, and I get dressed
Pack a Cooler of drinks, and a sack of snacks
Load up the truck, ready to go.

Go inside for one last check,
Confronted by two lovely faces,
A kiss to each I give,
Back out side, "buckle up my son"

Pull out of the drive and wave,
To Two people so special,
My wife staying home,
and our Daughter,
shes only three,

Us boys out for the day,
Gone fishing, and looking for trains.

back home later that night,
tuck the little ones in,
then to lay down next to my wife,
Talk about the fun day, and how we love our life
Fingers run through hair,
With an "I Love you Dear"
and a Gentle kiss goodnight.

Author notes

I wish to have a Family someday.

and I know it needs some work.

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  • MissyAnn
    September 16, 2007
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    beautisimus! lol i love it! keep it up!


  • PoetBoy2008
    June 21, 2007
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    beautiful. very good write. keep up the good work.


  • RisenSun84
    May 26, 2007
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    Precious

    This is so beautiful. It kind of made me teary eyed at the end. A very precious write.


  • ButterflyforChrist
    May 20, 2007
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    Awww, this is beautiful! And so sweet! Wonderful write!