She looks amazing wearing those heels and outfit
You'd never guess what lays behind that beautiful pearl white dress
You'd never know that glitter blue bruises lay on her flawless body
You'd never know that rudy red lines cover her sweet snow white wrists
Everynight {Just before Midnight} He binds her tight around her arms
Hits her snow white skin with his fists {Leaving her black and blue}
She never listened to the words of her friends
They said that he'd leave her for dead {She never took it in}
She always wanted a happily ever after {Roses and all}
But she never got what she wanted {Unless she wanted sex}
She bleeding from her eyes {Black mascara streams and all}
They always said that her Happy Ever After would fail
{Always said she'd finish her days bleeding on the floor}
Author notes
Option: Suicide/cutting
x.one last fix.x
Basicly she was in a abusive relationship and she couldn't see that. One day she just picked up her razor that she used only so often, and bled to death on the floor. Hope it's okay.
I'm not too good at Dirty Pretty poems and have only written 2 or 3. So I hope this is okay. This is also inspired by the quote "Happily Ever After... Failed". Hope that's okay too.
A contest entry
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Comments
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wow that was sad... =[. i hope this isn't true. good write. i love it. its beautifully sad.
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OH MY GOD! I LOOOOOOVE THIS! i am so jealous! lol you caught me at the perfect time, i was so in the mood for some death! (like death of a STUPID GUY) lol
well now that ive spelled it out for ya(!)
haha this is an AMAZING poem and i am asking WHERE THE HELL IS THAT TROPHY! THIS DESERVES ONE!!!
(so im giving you TWENTY BAZILLION CLAP INSTEAD !!!)
yay T! Go T! WOO HOO T!!!! CLAPCLAPCLAPCLAP....well you get it! hehe <3
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' But she never got what she wanted {Unless she wanted sex}
She bleeding from her eyes {Black mascara streams and all}
They always said that her Happy Ever After would fail
{Always said she'd finish her days bleeding on the floor}'
love these lines^^^ great poem, however, you've missed a phrase from your authors notes, could you please just amend this for me before tomorrow, thanks =] great poem ♥
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