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Saints Among Us

Some would tell you to be a saint
one must be canonized and go through
certain steps to prove their worthiness.

But I can tell you I've known a saint
kissed a saint and loved a saint
and I feel confident she rests in heaven.

Her life was spent in meager surroundings
however  quite intelligent, life kept her
from  pursuing a higher education.

Although others might have held
grudges or been filled with jealousy
she lived her life filled with love for all.

She'd drive for miles on country roads
to pick up grocery lists and "to do" lists
for her aging  neighbors.

She'd give free 'perms' to the aged farm wife
who'd never get
to enjoy a beauty parlor.

She would hoe gardens for the woman
who suffered from arthritis
and couldn't begin to garden herself.

Then come back at summers end
and can the tomatoes
and freeze the corn, she'd make a day of it.

Wall papering, painting, weeding flower beds
are just a few things she'd do for her country
neighbors who could not do for themselves.

She knew way back then
the dignity aged ones needed and gave the help
they had to have to live on their own.

While her life was spent caring
for others she spent little
time taking care of herself.

A ruptured appendix removed
any hope of having children or grandchildren
but her nieces and nephews filled the void.

Laughter and love
filled every room of her
old farm house.

She died one day quite unexpectedly
I guess we thought she'd live forever
the funeral home was filled to overflowing.

Her farm house was sold, bulldozed over,
nothing remains of her life
but the memories I carry in my heart forever.






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Written with much love for my aunt.

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  • princessleejwctlvr2
    June 30, 2007

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    wow. This is absolutel beautiful. The words are so tender and super sweet. You definately showed how much you love ur aunt. This is a wonderful write. I love it


  • shutter-bug
    May 15, 2007

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    oh my goodness, i almost cried. how powerful!! this is an amazing poem. i am most impressed. i love it!


  • Spiritual Poet gold member
    May 12, 2007

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    Amazing

    Yes she was a saint even if some churches don't recognize her as such. It is simple acts of kindness that mean the most. I love the poem and it is so touching. God bless you, Mark ....congrats on the trophy!


  • Frogzter gold member
    May 9, 2007

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    What wonderful lasting memories of your Aunt! This was such a delight to read! Heartfelt and warming!

    Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest!!

    Frogz~


    • cactus thorn
      May 9, 2007
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      She truly inspired me to do for others without complaining or expecting favors in return.

      And to this day I think of her often.

      Thanks for stopping by and taking the time to leave a comment.


  • Molassis
    May 9, 2007

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    I really like this entry... it's filled with emotion and love... the respect you show this woman really shows through in your words...

    I think what I like most about this is that you show that we each can make a difference in the world around us just by giving a little of ourselves! You've taken a normal, everyday person... and shown what an impact that one can have...

    This is well written... you've gotten your message out in clear tones and it's easily read. A fine contest entry!

    ~Melissa

    • cactus thorn
      May 9, 2007

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      Thank you for stopping by to read and comment on my poem.
      My aunt made a difference in everyone's life.
      She never asked for one thing but gave completely.


  • going nowhere
    May 8, 2007

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    i am completely choked up. this is beautiful, and it sounds like you not only knew an incredible woman, but took the time to notice how wonderful she was. Great job.

    • cactus thorn
      May 8, 2007
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      Thank you for your kind comments and private message.
      What a blessing YOU must be to your friends and family.
      You always take the time to comment and make my day!

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