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The Timptist

These here have I seen as I have traved by on
freeways, highways, trains, and planes
years of hurtful words has taken its total
on the faces that has been marred by so much
pain in traditions carelessly spoken words
created by generations of customs buildup in ego
destroying what worth that might have been
gain in youthful eyes longing for the innocent
searching and striving to recovering that which was lost.

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  • Ter
    May 13, 2007
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    Thank You

    Thank you for the comment, you're so sweet!