There is no reflection
There are no words
Nor smiling faces
Only except for yours
You bleed my blood until daylight sets
And tear my heart until I can't breathe
Even if I'm set free from sin
You know it'll cease to last
These voices don't laugh
My images blur - so I no longer see
The sun forgets to shine
And I'm lacking mind to ever explain
Why does this hurt?
Afraid to even speak
I close my eyes
And just fall asleep
But all I feel is a feeling unknown
Author notes
This is about a certain someone, and about how it's kind of driving me insane. I have no words to describe this feeling. It is not love, so don't you dare fucking say that word around me.
Please comment.
Please tell me what you think
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I don't think love exists. I think that extreme lust exists 
Anyway, I'm wishing you the best in your endeavour! Xoxo
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I found the flow a bit awkward on this one, although it doesn't really matter so much, considering the "raw" nature of the subject matter. I'm just trying to make sense of the ending of the second-last stanza - maybe just me, but it seems to be written somewhat strangely.
Now I'll probably spend a bit of time pondering over this.
- Nick
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