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Ghosts of past.

Haunt the halls with shattered dreams,
Pierce the silence with my screams.
Ever waking, ever dying,
Drown in rivers that I'm crying.

Mourners chant in monotone
How could you leave me all alone?
Now I don't know who to blame,
Life will never be the same.

Life is hard, and then you die.
Without you here, I don't know why,
I'm forced to carry on alone.
Things are harder with you gone.

The easy out is never right,
But still it keeps me up at night.
Cause all the future that I see,
Is cloaked in pain and misery.

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  • Twilight4Eternity
    June 24, 2007

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    I like the title. There were a couple times where the flow seemed off a bit.

    A future of misery is never good. Thanks for the entry.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    June 23, 2007

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    This is a very nice write. It is hard when you lose someone you love.
    My favorite lines are :
    Life is hard, and then you die.Without you here, I don't know why,I'm forced to carry on alone.Things are harder with you gone.
    Best wishes xxx


  • blondone
    May 9, 2007
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    Love the flow and the rhyme I just need a option # in the authors comment box...