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The Art of Confusion

Tempted to finally let thick stone walls fall
As you never leave me waiting for your call
But there are so many other hearts on your mind
Will I simply be just yet another find?
Confused in my mind if there's more than just friendship
Maybe all these thoughts are just causing me to trip
For it sounds odd to even hear myself say
That maybe we'll be together, possibly one day
I consider the thought for a moment or two
Then go back to wondering, do I even like you?
Maybe its simply the idea that I like
Or the fact that I'm starting to fear being alone...

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(I left the last 2 lines not rhyming for a reason, in case u may be wondering)

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  • Flamenco
    May 11, 2007

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    I love this poem!! It's so true if you're friends with someone and you wonder if they might like you more than that and ask yourself the same question.


  • pandora ink
    May 8, 2007
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    Did you write this about me or about you? Every line is an echo of every thought that has gone through my head in the last couple of weeks. Good job, way to creep me out, you freakish mind reader you. LOL. Elisa, shut up and go do some homework before Soul Sisters.
    Love you!!!

    Queenie Poo