Mary had a little lamb
Which grew into a ewe
For ewe Mary didn't give a damn
Quite soon she had ewe stew.
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Fractured Fairy Tales by piccola.
700 points, ended May 11, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Fairy tales and Fantasies! by Doll Faise.
700 points, ended August 11, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Not So Happily Ever After by November-Dani.
410 points, ended September 27, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Nursery Rhymes Gone Bad by Syko Path.
375 points, ended June 7, 32 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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short and not sweet
i loved it great job!
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lol i loved it
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Very well written, it made me laugh.
Well done, thank you for entering. Best of luck,
Dani. -
haha funny and disturbing at the same time well done!
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Pretty realistic for a fairy tale. There's no happy ever here, not for the lamb/ewe anyway. But lamb stew is always nice though mutton isn't so nice. Anyway, M. had a good feed.
Amusing write you have here.
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Short, but absolutely hilarious. It definetely puts a twist on Mary had a little lamb. Thanks for entering. Good luck.
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Nice. What a mean girl! But I guess that is how most people feel... once animals ... and virtually anything grows out of being a cute baby, who cares if they're killed?! Thank you for entering and good luck.
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this was a great write..it flowed really well and your words were powerful and emotional..i really liked the last line very creative and different keep writting your talened and good luck in the contest
~Chrissy~ -
Seems all you poets out there are hungry! Someone stole lamb chops and now ewe stew. I'm dieting and this isn't helping. lol. Thanks for the entry and the smile.
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this was short and hilarious
Ha that had me almost in stitches,, cool ,,i think my trophy chances have dimmed,,,,lol good luck this is so cool.
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hahahahahahah g'job lol...very entertaining
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