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Empty

Crying
Dying
Is it emptiness
You're implying?

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Written July 25th, 2003

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  • KirisutoHanyou
    July 27, 2003
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    um....wow, that was really short. Short but inspiring. Very good, keep it up.

  • Mind Blowing
    July 25, 2003
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    wow....again I'm takin in speechlessness....ok i dont know if thats a word....I'm trying to look smart...it doesnt work real well..but this was another amazing write from you....thanx for sharing and by the way u have great taste in poetry (i read you poets to read thing on your authors page) they are good to...but u r by far great...u inspire me...keep it up not a lot of people do that

    ~Molly<~

  • accordingtome
    July 25, 2003
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    wow