The world through the mirror where I want to fly
Has mountains and streams and a clear blue sky
It is a world full of dragons and Kings
and pretty white horses floating on wings
The world I live in is so plain
school and books and Great Aunt Jane
Dreary skys so full of rain
lots of studing with nothing to gain
I dream that I will fly away
Fly into another day
through my mirror to the world
Where knights carry banners neatly furled
I realize it's true
they have lots of work to do
and that I'm better off to dream
for my life's better then their's may seem
Author notes
anonymous contest so no names mentioned please.
A contest entry
- My First Picture Contest by Ethereal One.
900 points, ended May 20, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is good....do u really have a great aunt jane lol
i wish the world was like this... -
Excellent imagery!
Your words express your desire to escape from the hum-drum boredom of our world, into a wonderful fantasy world of white horses, Kings, dragons, and beautiful surroundings. I like the idea of flying through the mirror into this enchanted world.
Your rhythm and rhyming is excellent.
Thank you for entering this contest, and good luck!
Aurora 2012
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