I want to drown myself in people who love God,
with a passion that cast the oceans depths to shame.
I long for the melodies of the earth wonder,
hidden beneath the slaughter of things inocent and good.
Does my longing for things of simple nature
put a burden to my name?
I wish so fervently to sleep and have dreams
of my own heart.
I have a thirst to find MY true heart.
For somewhere in the midst of my feeble morals
i lost it inside my mind.
What fixation i have on the good
and lasting word of God.
If i could only find it in myself to once again....
let the words not bleed over my sinful body.
Please tell me what you think
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I really like this,you expressed yourself very well here,you just be you..Hazel.
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the worst first...spelling.
dround= drown
depts= depths
benieth= beneath
phew glad that's over with! So now I can praise you for all your deep and seemingly unproductive thoughts. Thinking is something that can be horrible or wonderful for your state of mental health. I think everyone goes through stages of intense philosophical and self-assement-like thinking. It hurst. I know it hurts. It will pass...maybe tomorrow maybe next year, but it will pass. Just know that after you get out of this ugly pit of tar, you'll be able to walk easier.
Then again, i'm only acting like i know what i'm talking about so take that as what you will and i hope you have a better tomorrow then you had today
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That was good..
Deep, and kinda emotional, depends on where you stand, and how you look at it, but i liked it... Your a good writer... Keep it up, and never get your self down. Take Care..
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