don't patronize me,
you are like a stool
three legged, tipping
with one leg broken
awaiting an unsuspecting
sitter, needing rest
chuckling evilly
as they land upon the floor
A contest entry
- Eloquence in Brevity by RatherImaginative.
1400 points, ended July 31, 2007, 29 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Ooooh, I really like the tone of this. The imagery you used is excellent and original . . . a really good way to describe such a person! Thanks so much for entering my contest!
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delightful
Had to laugh as I read this and appreciated the jest here. nicely done.
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