As she watches the crowd walk by,
Not suprised as the push and shove their way through.
Ignoring the bruises and cuts,
That she hides.
She watches the couple from a distance,
Holding back her tears.
The once full of life,
Has become nothing more then a void.
She's cried enough tears,
For nothing.
Sitting alone ignoring the lecture,
Resting her head on the cold table.
Goosebumps appear on her arms,
Biting her lower lip.
Couldn't sleep again,
As the haunting images won't leave.
She can't cry,
Not even a single drop.
Bags under her eyes,
As another restless night.
Knowing she can't cry herself to sleep,
Not anymore.
Her eyes use to shimmer with the sunlight,
But now she lives with the night.
The sparkle that use to be the stars,
Is now just abyss.
No one cared to help her,
Nor noticed what she was going through.
Everyone just left her,
Broken and destroyed.
Bella Knoll
8:38pm 5/7/07
A contest entry
- I wan't to get lost in your eyes by shattered logic.
440 points, ended May 13, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Let me feel the loss by NickelleteXninja.
600 points, ended May 14, 2007, 40 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Through Your Eyes. by Poetryintheblood.
350 points, ended May 22, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank you for your entry, Josephine
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Right into it, this is an AMAZING tale to tell... adly i dont like free verse and this more than rhyme shows free verse... i'd hate to add you to the finalists but damn my stubborn mind... i cant turn it down! good luck... thanks for enterin
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Hey could I get you to put your option Number in your author comment box. Please and thank!!
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Yea it's 2 and 4
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