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Three

A star in her own world
bright shining, she does gleam
although her light was not as perfect, as everyone made it seem. 

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  • fleur de lys
    May 13, 2007

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    CONGRATULATIONS on winning silver! Short but very, very sweet. Great write, keep up the good work.

    Peace and love,
    Petratani


  • Lj-
    May 12, 2007
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    Love the rhyme.
    I liked the feeling of this and the mystery.


    Thank you for your entry,
    Best of luck!


  • BeAuT1FuLlyXxBrOkEn
    May 7, 2007
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    love this too....awesome shortie girl!