The soft buzzing in my ears
that continues through the day
the way my heart no longer beats
at all the same way
The humming of my heart
driving away my sanity
as pieces start to shatter
in tune with his vanity
It lulls me to sleep
yet awakens me screaming
my beautifully tragic swan song
inside my head is beating
Heartbroken lulls
sing me sweetly to my grave
a place of silence
that my heart does crave
Author notes
Option 1
Heartbroken Lull
A contest entry
- Options Contest!!!! by Dark Edge.
675 points, ended May 24, 2007, 22 entries
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I thought that this title would be a tough one to go by, but you made excellent work with this piece!! There is a lot of emotion in it and the way I'm interpreting it, now this is just me, there is a bit of a void of emotion also! That is an excellent little poem that rings true to many hearts. Great job!! Good luck in my contest!!!
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awesome poem niccy...you should try rhyming more often....the ones where you do are incredible...loved this chica, good luck in the contest!
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