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In My Dreams

In my dreams, your comforting arms are around me,
        Your eyes delve into my soul,
        One hand is cold against my bare chest,
        A blanket over us both.
Why are my dreams untrue with reality?
        The cold harsh reality,
        When you won’t throw me a second glance;
        Just keep on walking.
It is just so hard to know how you feel,
        When you won’t talk to me,
        And for all I know,
        You are having the same dreams as I.
All I know is the one place I enjoy, is in your arms,
        In my dreams,
        Of what we used to have,
        And now we don’t.

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  • ChasingtheStarlight
    May 28, 2007
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    I really love this. =]

    We are just so full of emotion aren't we? =P

    Poets rule!


  • Bella Luna
    May 8, 2007

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    Ok great job on the writing but what happened to clint?lol jk jk I love it you truely captured the emotion and I know exactly hoe you feel.

    ~Chelbelle


  • reckless abandon
    May 7, 2007

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    sad.

    this is really good, but very sad

    "Your eyes delve into my soul" i love the word delve and i always want to use it but i never have a good line to use it in =D

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