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Cut.

Bleed, bitch.
Drag that blade across your skin.
Don't be a pussy, go deeper.
All that anger that burns in your throat -
take it. Use it.
All that pain that rests in your eyes -
take it. Use it.
All the hurt, all the regret, all the unanswered questions -
take them all. Use them all.
Allow your heartache and misery
to fuel your fire.
Channel your fury into your hand
and slice as deep as you can.
That's right, clench your teeth.
Cut the skin, ruin it, make it bleed.
Watch the crimson drip onto the floor like rain.
Can you feel it?
Was it worth it?
Do it again.
Over and over, deeper and deeper.
Don't you dare cry,
and bleed, bitch, bleed.

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  • x ShyGirl x
    May 11, 2007

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    Umm.. i like this, but it seems kind of.. i don't know the word. But it is really good.
    Would you compare scars with me? Just a thought.

  • Grave-Digger
    May 8, 2007

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    So that means I can start doing cocain right? It's pretty addictive stuff, or so I'm told. I don't do the stuff, I just like the way it smells.


    • October.
      May 9, 2007
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      Be my guest. We don't care about each other any more, so what does it matter, right?

  • disparate
    May 8, 2007
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    Heh. That "Bleed, bitch, bleed." I remember having that in one I wrote a few years ago, back in.. grade eleven I think. It's a nice line from "Kim" by Eminem.

    The scars aren't worth it, you know. They're just ugly constant reminders. We should compare sometime.


    • October.
      May 9, 2007
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      And I thought I was being unique.

      Yeah... I know that. I just felt like writing something - doesn't mean I've cut lately. Just had to get it out, you know?
      I'm up for a good ole' comparison.

      • disparate
        May 9, 2007
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        I never meant that I thought you had done it or anything. Just that the scars aren't worth it.

        And cutting isn't *half* as harmful as snorting cocaine. Though cocaine is probably the more pleasant feeling. Unless you're into S&M.

  • Surely
    May 7, 2007
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    I'm at a loss for words.

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