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Everything To Lose

Nobody said life was easy,

And neither did I,

So that’s why I tell you this

With that lead-hearted sigh.

 

I shall start with love;

It makes me wonder if there’s any one true.

In the end, it’s never unconditional,

And a burden to carry for the young few.

 

Reality seems its own illusion.

It plays with our heads like a game,

And the twists made in this reality…

It creates life as nothing but shame.

 

As for me - I’m sick of everything.

My world is stabled by nothing but lies.

I’m all too ready to throw it all away

And run from this life that I despise.

 

Now it’s your turn for judgment.

Which path will you choose?

It’s all a riddle of life’s loving illusion,

And you have everything to lose.

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  • BeautifulDisaster9
    May 8, 2007

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    WHOA.

    This is amazing. I absolutely love your rhyme scheme, and this has a wonderful point at the end. Well done!

    Best of luck and thanks for entering.

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